wangjiamingcs 发表于 2021-8-21 15:37   全显示 1楼
写的确实厉害，有一定的细节性描写，但还是不够细致，通过人性而被捕的女巫，与世俗相背的想法王子的救出，内容大体结合原著背景，但是作为同人小说如何延伸故事情节与带色细节描写的尺度把握有待加强，对今后的女角色如何出场及收服我十分期待，最后希望作者再接再厉写更多的好文给我们欣赏，加油！
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